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Auror Trainee Occlumens October '08 MOTM[M0n:353]
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Post by Laura Kehoe on Sept 22, 2008 14:51:30 GMT -7
Excellent profile! Just one thing though-the whole way through your profile you spelt used as use, if you could change that? (If you copy and paste onto Microsoft Word and use the 'find and replace] tool you should be able to change it quickly)
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Slytherin 7th Year
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Je reviendrai vainqueur, ou ne reviendrai pas.
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Post by Amethyst Cott on Sept 23, 2008 1:56:00 GMT -7
Done&done. Hope that's better now ^_^
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Fudge just saw you naked (...also Voldemort's alive, but thats not what's scary)
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Post by James on Sept 25, 2008 23:08:54 GMT -7
Wowzers. You just snapped this up in a few minutes, hm? One thing I noticed, not really an error, but that I'd like to see mentioned: So she took the Dark Arts class they had that year, right? You said she could only watch, but she would have had to torture other students as apart of the curriculum. Did she do this? How did she feel about it?
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Post by Amethyst Cott on Sept 26, 2008 3:20:21 GMT -7
Yep, just snapped my fingers ;]
Added in a bit about the DADA lessons, quoted here for you:
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Fudge just saw you naked (...also Voldemort's alive, but thats not what's scary)
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Post by James on Sept 26, 2008 3:39:01 GMT -7
"On the inside, though, she could feel her insides tighten and squirm, throwing up in the girls bathroom after many lessons. " Myrtle would have had a laugh, for once. Sorting now.
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