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Post by Clytemnestra Rodovolve on Jul 31, 2009 15:26:41 GMT -7
Full Name: Clytemnestra Rodovolve
Date of Birth: Thirty Five Years of age: April 9th, 1976
Place of Birth: Newcastle, England
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance:
 "I'm not just a pretty smile, I've got fangs"
Haggard Appearance: (This appearance is only when entering a situation where she might have to fight. It’s to make her opponents view her as less of a threat in a physical brawl as well as a duel)
Clytemnestra isn't exactly the tallest woman, but she usually adds a few inches on with the assistance of heels. She has a thin frame a lot like used retired dancer who hasn’t taken the best care of themselves over the years. Dancing was once upon a time a job of hers, but that was long ago. Her skin has taken to a pale tone making her almost look sickly. She looks haggard as if she hasn’t slept in months. Her eyes have dark circles that seem to be painted on because they never seem to fade no matter how rest she gets. Her pupils are unnaturally cat like and blazing with a mixture of sadistic nature, quick wit, and peppiness. She has thick eyebrows that thin out as they move inwardly to the middle of her forehead.
Her lips are always a dark sort of red almost black and usually curled into a playful smile. Her hair is black and looks very dry almost fragile. It falls past her shoulders, looking devoid of any good health. She rarely ties it back preferring it going however it wants to go. Sometimes it lays flat falling onto her shoulder or it sticks which ever way it wants. Her arms are thin and don’t seem to have much muscle to them. Her fingers are long and seem as if they lack any feeling in them, but yet can do what they need so very quickly. Her nails are a little long and sharpened to a knife’s point.
.She usually wears rather homely clothing and they don’t show a lot of skin. There are the rare occasions when she will wear something that isn’t typical of her haggard appearance, but these are very rare.
Real Appearance:
When she isn’t under the disguise that she uses to ensure she is underestimated she is actually rather lovely. Her appearance is actually very healthy or at least compared to the prior appearance. Her skin tone is still rather pale, but she does have a healthy weight to her. Her eyes have lost the dark rings around them or at least it’s faded enough to make her appear healthy. Her eyebrows are thinner, but strangely short. Her lips are now a robust shade of red or occasionally the darker red that still holds a little gleam to it. Her hair looks alive again and falls in lustrous curtains past her shoulders unless of course she feels in the mood to curl it.
Her arms are still thin, but the muscle is evident. Her fingers look young and agile, her nails now normal length. Her build has changed a little instead of looking like a retired dancer she looks like a dancer in their prime. She also has a different walk to her. It’s more predatory, each step as if this is just one big game of cat and mouse.
Her clothing of choice now is things that are fitting to for her age. They show her curves and give her a younger look. They are however always practical.
(Sister’s appearance/She is currently using this to continue being an Auror)
When she takes up the persona of her younger sister her appearance changes greatly. Her once dark hair is golden blond, past shoulder length. It curls at the edges and has a bounce to it which her sister obsessed about having. Her eyes are a very lustrous green, almost like jade. Her eyes now hold a gentleness to them that Clytemnestra lacked. Her face is softer and is a lot gentler. She has a more child like build still retaining some of her younger appearance so she doesn’t actually appear her age. She is shorter then most are around her age, but she does have the body language that says she is far from weak. Her clothing is much more feminine and usually involves some bright color that results in her looking like a florescent neon sign.
Occupation: Ex-Auror/Death Eater/Auror (Disguised as sister)
---BACKGROUND---
Heritage:Pure-Blood
Family:
Justin Rodovolve (Father/Murdered by Clytemnestra)
Emilia Rodovolve (Mother/Deceased)
Jessica Rodovolve (Sister/Gryffindor/Murdered by Clytemnestra, but this is unknown to the ministry. Clytemnestra has taken her identity.)
History:
Clytemnestra came from a background far from humble, but she never herself shared in the splendors of a lavish life style. The reason being was that her mother was a known adulteress and it was easy to tell she looked nothing like her father. His assumption had been correct, but she was not the result of a secret love. She was in fact the result of a drunken woman being taken advantage of by a brutal man. Her mother however had been ashamed of the circumstances of her conception and therefore never revealed this to her daughter or her husband. She gladly accepted the idea she had cheated and that her daughter was the result of a forbidden love that would no longer continue now that she would be tied down by a child. Clytemnestra was a special child, but one flaw would damn her. She much like Voldemort liked the ability to love. She had been conceived without it and raised without it; she never understood its warmth and therefore viewed it as weakness. The closest thing to it she is capable of is lust and that’s it.
At birth it was evident she had gained many traits that couldn’t have come from her mother. At birth her appearance changed in a split second and then back. It was the first display of her natural talent to alter her appearance at will. She was a Metamorphagus and so much more, but they would never see the brilliance this girl held. They would ignore it because they refused to accept that a daughter who was the result of infidelity could be stronger then their legitimate child in actuality have so much more potential then her own parents could posses.
She grew up as a second class member of the family and soon lost even that with the birth of her sister. The little affectionate things her mother used to do became a thing of the past. She couldn’t even remember them because they ended before she was even able to walk. This particular fact made her a bitter girl and she had a particular dislike of her father because he unlike his mother didn’t try to hide his revulsion at the fact his daughter looked nothing like him or his wife.
When she became old enough to truly grasp the situation she changed the only thing about her that linked her to her family, her eyes. They once had been bright green, but now they held a golden gaze much like a light amber. She no longer tried to be part of the family, but in actuality tried to separate herself from it as much as possible. She lost herself in a world of books and nature. She rejected the trappings of family and of being human instead she learned from the freedom the animals around her possessed. This was how her personality had been shaped; the feral intelligence came from the wild cats she watched. Everything about her was animalistic because it was what truly raised her and had helped her mature. It hadn’t been people that helped her through the tough times of younger years, but in actuality it had been the silent winds and the ebbing waves that had taught her. She learned her dominant nature from the wild dogs that roamed in the woods near her house. Her parents never understood her and in truth never wanted to. Instead they just pushed her off to the side as if she was in no way related to them and that her younger sister was there only child.
Her sister younger by a year displayed the ability to use magic before her older sister. It had been a simple levitation of a plate, but Clytemnestra’s would come later and would be a bit more entertaining. She had been reading in her room, the door locked and the sun high in the sky. Her father stormed in yelling at her, Clytemnestra freaked out at first not sure what she had done wrong. Her father went to strike her and the next thing she knew everything in the room was ablaze and her father was dangling out the window holding onto the ledge for dear life. This was when her darker side became apparent. She cut her father’s fingers with broken shards of glass to make him release his grasp on the window seal. The end result was the loss of several fingers and him falling from the second story of the house. It was thanks to her mother he survived and it was thanks to her mother she survived the coming years. The woman felt she owed the girl that much since it was her fault for the poor child’s horrid upbringing.
From that day forward her father beat her, not enough to kill or cause permanent damage. Enough to hurt and leave visible marks, he was always infuriated to see that after every beating she immediately rid herself of the scars. Eventually as time went by it became a game to her and with each beating she became more and more taunting. She had grown up faster then her parents could have foreseen. Eventually her Metamorphagus powers came into play and she would alter her form to give it a few sharp spines here and there to cause her father the same amount of pain he inflicted upon her. Eventually the beatings ended not only because he found himself walking away with more scars, but because she had gotten an acceptance letter to Hogwarts.
Clytemnestra was taken to Diagon Alley to obtain her wand. Olivander remarked that she was a very difficult one because the wands didn’t reject her, she rejected them. It was a rarity for the wielder to reject the weapon. It was a sign of someone who held an inner maturity as well as an either good personality or a less then desired one. When her wand was chosen Olivander put her out as quickly as he could. He had given her the wand in hopes she would reject, but when she accepted it he knew a dark witch stood in his shop. He hoped it might change and eventually the wand might change its nature, but he doubted that. It was one of the few wands that had ended up in his position after giving it to a witch or wizard. The wand’s previous owner had met an early demise at the hands of the wand. Its dark nature hadn’t gone well with the previous owner’s more gentle personality and eventually lead them to suicide. He feared what it would to someone whose nature fit the wand’s. Simply because it would be much like giving a young child who posses traits of cruelty a book on how to make that cruelty into a weapon. The wand she possessed was not a neutral wand, its core and wood both possessed qualities that made them great for the use of Dark Magic.
She was sorted into Slytherin and it was remarked by one of the teachers at the time that she looked like a witch with talent, but so much hatred locked inside that she would one day destroy herself. Her first meeting with her fellow Slytherins was an interesting one. She wasn’t treated with respect, but no one ventured to torment her. It was easy to tell that she had fangs and she wouldn’t hesitate to use them. It would be until sometime near the middle of the school year she would be accepted. During her classes she paid close attention to the lesson and was known for her ability to catch on quickly the only thing that kept her from being a teacher favorite was that her personality was so visible. It was so easy to tell she wasn’t capable of returning any affection they gave and would reject it. She hadn’t come here to befriend, but to learn how to defend herself. This was easy to tell when Defense Against the Dark Arts class came into play. She was at her best during duels, the only class she showed as much talent in was Transfiguration and Charms, but charms was depending on the lesson.
It was near winter break that things began to change, she of course never went home on the vacation days simply because of the fact she liked being away from an abusive father. She had most of the common room to herself only a handful of them having stayed behind. One of the girls who had stayed behind was a year above her and for some strange reason believed herself to be the ruling force. She had come from a more spoiled background and believed she deserved what ever she wanted. She tried to make Clytemnestra her personal servant, but that didn’t go well. This was when her second gift revealed itself. During the duel that ensued from the falling out she was always one step ahead of the older girl. She seemed to always known what was coming next. It was because of a little thing called defense precognition that she one the duel and also gained a little popularity because of the fact she humiliated a girl a year above her seemingly without much effort.
When break ended her fellow Slytherins viewed her differently and the ones with a bit more back bone actually befriended her. She ended up in a group of Slytherins that much like previous Death Eaters held blood purity and had family members that held blood purity in high standing. She herself never believed in this because of the fact she never really understood the difference between a mudblood and a pureblood, but she was willing to adopt their belief if it meant she would be accepted. It was also a way to focus all her undiluted hatred for her family into a more acceptable way. She became one of the more fanatical Slytherins, but she however didn’t let it show outside of the common room.
Come second year her sister joined her at Hogwarts and was sorted into Ravenclaw. Her sister had a to gentle personality to survive Slytherin, but she had the brains for Ravenclaw. The two of them rarely saw one another and on those few occasions it was usually a very interesting fight wither it involved words, wand, or fist. Clytemnestra always one and she was always cruel about her taunting creating a bitter hatred between the two. As the year progressed she seemed to attract darker and darker members of her house. She ended up with the crowd that consisted of people far above her in age and in cruelty. She learned from them and refined her own talents to fit in this crowd. It was something that had a good and a bad side. She was able to better defend herself during the time’s she returned to school, but it made her a bit more unstable. She had such confliction emotions and eventually it just became a massive storm that seemed to consume her. It would be years before the storm would clear and that beautifully cruel smile would form.
The second year very little occurred except for her getting high marks in all her classes except for history which was the only class she had absolutely no interest in. The only thing to note was that she had interest in becoming an Auror because she enjoyed dueling, but her teachers didn’t believe she could accomplish it. Not because she was talented enough, but because of her unstable behavior. They didn’t openly say it, but it was easy to tell in the way they looked at her. The dreamed died as quickly as it came and it was the first step that would bring her to the path that would lead her down a dark road that would accept her for her nature and would actually love her for it.
Come third year her sister picked out the courier she hoped to obtain upon graduation. It was oddly the same dream Clytemnestra had previously had herself. She was from happy when she heard the news especially when she noticed how the teachers looked at her younger sister as if they knew she could accomplish it. This was the reason Clytemnestra made her sister’s life a living hell and on several occasions burned her homework by tracking her down and occasionally following her into the Ravenclaw common room disguised as one of her friends. Her sister didn’t think it was in actuality her sister doing this to her because Clytemnestra was always disguised as someone else. The only thing that she blamed on her sister was being knocked flat on her face during a small dueling tournament. Clytemnestra hadn’t entered and had no entrance in doing so until her sister had signed up. The two of them made it to the final round and it seemed that Jessica, the younger sister would be the one to win. Clytemnestra displayed a lazy talent to her that was so taunting that her sister went into a blind frenzy. Clytemnestra ended the duel by reflecting her sister’s attacks right back at her with lazy arrogance. It was the final act that showed how different the two where in personality and in strength. Clytemnestra was the superior one and no one ever forget that after that duel.
Fourth year was a bit more laid back. She had gotten the grades to show that she had a good chance of pursuing a job as an Auror after graduation. Her personality seemed less volatile as she took on a bit of a chameleon ability to change her personality to fit the situation. It was like she had pulled a 360, but in actuality she was just an excellent actress. She was really starting to gain the Slytherin cunningness that was their trade mark. Fourth year was just a time for her to come into her own and really begin to descend into the darker aspects of her personality and yet appear to be an actually good girl to those she had to play that game for.
Fifth year it was evident she was going to become an Auror. Her grades made it possible for her to take the required classes next year and she was still keeping up the act so she was in the clear. It was remarked by a teacher “She will be a brilliant Auror, but the question is will she be one using legal practices or illegal?” That was the only thing teachers did actually question about her. She would be good at the job, but the question was how would she accomplish the ends of capturing the dark witch or wizard she was sent after. She did have a relapse close to the end of the year, but it wasn’t really given much attention because of the actual situation. She hadn’t started the fight, but she had defended herself with great ferocity. The duel actual worked in her favor because the dueling instructor noticed that she was skilled at dueling and also had a knack for being one step ahead. This was the main reason she was in the list of mostly likely to become an Auror.
Sixth year came and went without much happening. The only thing of note was that she broke a lot of old ties and built friendships with the kinder Slytherin that didn’t have a possible Death Eater vibe about them. This was one of the many small things she did to ensure she would get the job she truly desired. Her grades had been the great deciding factor and thanks to them she had become an Auror in training upon graduation.
She spent her time as an Auror of training learning about what the dark arts themselves happened to be so that she could prepare herself for a duel against a dark wizard or witch. Clytemnestra actually gained a bit of interest in them, but she hid it behind professionalism.
She wouldn’t have been a full fledged Auror until she was twenty-one, but the raise of Voldemort prompted for their to be a few promotions. Clytemnestra’s gift made her one of the few that was strictly assigned only to hunting Death Eaters down. This would turn out to be their biggest mistake. During an attempt at a round up she ended up being kidnapped by a lovely group of Death Eaters, Bellatrix Lestrange being amongst them. Unlike the Aurors with her she wasn’t so devoted to the cause. She in actuality had a taste for the Dark Arts and thanks to the abilities of Bellatrix mental defense and attack this was discovered and exploited. Clytemnestra at first resisted the lure, but eventually succumbs to the dark arts. She didn’t become a Death Eater, but instead was a initiate.
It wasn’t until after the Battle at the Ministry she would be considered a Death Eater. She fought with all of her skill to hold off two Order members simultaneously to allow Bellatrix to lure Harry Potter out of the room. That was her claim however and it was backed by a few Death Eaters. She had in actuality just been fighting out of self defense and had succeeded in greatly harming both combatants.
Upon taking the mark she became one of the better known Death Eaters not only because of her cruelty, but also her talents with a wand. Throughout the war she clashed with many of the people she had once called co-workers.
Before Dumbledore’s death Clytemnestra returned to her home and killed her father, but spared her mother and sister. She told them to go into hiding for now and that she would return to them after the war. She would make sure they lived in the lap of luxury without relying on father’s fortune. The other reason was because she feared that if the Dark Lord’s via for power failed her family would be persecuted for her involvement. Her sister had been fired from her job as an Auror shortly after obtaining it when it was discovered she was a blood relative of Clytemnestra which was the reason for her concern over their lives. During their time hiding her mother passed. Clytemnestra wasn’t present for the death because it happened during the Battle of Hogwarts.
Clytemnestra was a well known threat during this battle because she changed her appearance often to appear as a student or an order member. The result was often the death or harm of the victim she picked out. She was present at the Dark Lord’s demise and was one of the few that cried out in despair. She had been a fanatic follower because of the fact he was the only one who shared her lack of understanding of love and he was also the only one who made her feel weak. That was the reason for her despair at his demise. However she had no intentions of going to Azkaban for her loyalty. She altered her appearance and fled the scene.
She found her sister and found out her mother was deceased. Clytemnestra took on her sister’s appearance and then murdered her. After the event she returned to the ministry in hopes of obtaining the job of Auror was once again. Now that the war had ended and Clytemnestra was supposedly deceased made it much easier for her to be reinstated under the guise of her younger sister.
She has since kept to an honest living and pretending to be the ideal Auror. It wasn’t until the battle of Hogsmeade that she actually took on her original appearance. The woman they encountered alongside her group of follower, she had heard about it and actual admired her because she was keeping the Death Eaters alive. She however didn’t look up to her; the only woman she had idolized had been Bellatrix. During the battle she chased after one of the fleeing followers and returned in her true appearance. She fought fanatically to increase Juliet’s chances of escape. When Juliet and her followers left she left as well. She joined the ranks, but didn’t become an active member. She retains her position at the ministry under the guise of her sister and is currently taking lessons from Juliet in Leg. And Occ.
---GENERAL CHARACTER TRAITS---
Personality:
Clytemnestra can’t be described as “Good” or “Evil” she is simply herself. She does things that get her through the day to day and keep her bank account from hitting zero. However she does go out and torture people because she wants to do it, she would do it with or without pay and if she actually needed them. She sees life as a dog eat dog affair. The strong survive and the weak don’t and she isn’t one of the weak ones. She will fight for her life like no other, but won’t put herself in danger to save someone else. If they got themselves into the situation they can get themselves out of it or at least that’s the way she sees it. Besides you live, you die that’s the end of it. No reason for her to have to save anyone else she still has some living to do and doesn’t really like the idea of dying just yet. Maybe after she has figured out what the hell she wants to do with herself she will be more willing to bite the dust.
She is confused about how her allegiance is to. She hates Juliet because she doesn’t view the woman as the type she would wish to follow. Clytemnestra isn’t the type who likes to follow behind someone she doesn’t fear and thus is against Juliet’s ruling. However she has no intentions of breaking away from the death eaters because it is her life. She doubts she could reform even if she wished to. Especially because of her very strange nature. She doesn’t thrive off of violence or at least not from war, she is more of a personal killer preferring up and close bloodshed however she does thrive off of revenge and hatred. Those are the two driving forces behind her wanting to stay with the death eaters She enjoys her job and has no intentions of giving it up.
For someone with such a dreary outlook on life she is strangely happy most of the time. She tries to enjoy life so she treats each day like her last and tries her best to stay in high spirits. She accomplishes this by strong will power or a strong glass of brandy which ever one works that morning. She started getting tired of a negative personality after a while and decided to try and be cheery. There are times when she wants to strangle herself for being so damn happy in the mornings, but other then that its been working well for her. She does have a strange habit of breaking out in song or talking to herself as if nobody is around her
She doesn't care much for others unless of course she relies on them as a source of money, in which case they are here main priority to please. To her it’s all about money in those situations, but if that person promises her a chance for power things get a little more serous. As long as she gets paid she doesn’t care and as long as it doesn’t result in Juliet breathing down her neck. It isn’t so much the money to her, but more so just the thrill of killing.
She has a very cynical sense of humor as well as sarcastic. She will make a joke at anyone expense if she herself finds it funny. She also has no problem with insulting people wither they have said something to her or not. She just enjoys a bit of confrontation now and then and will occasionally spark it so that she can have a little fun. Life is a game to her or at least when she wants it to be. Sometimes she is serous and other times she is carefree. It just depends on the mood of the day or the second.
Mood swings are her nature. She can go from happy to angry in a split second all depending on what she feels like being. Some say she is mentally unstable, schizophrenic, or just plain crazy. Clytemnestra begs to differ however. She views her personality as just a fun little game of hot and cold. One minute she can be a sweet and almost innocent woman and the next a cruel and vicious Which with her eyes set on hurting something or someone. She likes being that unpredictable type of person. However there is a downside to all of this. She is paranoid and is known to think the worst of people and occasionally attack them if they seem suspicious enough to her. She has yet to hurt more then a few people who didn’t actually deserve it. More or less her hunches are reliable most of the time and so she relies on them and people who seek her help rely on them as well.
Clytemnestra is a very intelligent woman, but she isn’t a born leader nor is she a leader at all. She follows no one, but she isn’t fit to lead a group of people. She is fit for fighting for someone who she believes deserves her allegiance. Her intelligence is also more of a feral and predator level. She has a feral type of personality that makes her more of a threat to all around her then just to the person in front of her. This makes her a wild card that few wish to put in play.
She likes for people to underestimate her which is why she tends to enter every battle looking much weaker then she actually is. During the Death Eater meetings she shows her true appearance, but when entering a situation involving a fight she will cling to her weaker appearance for a little while. Once that little game is over she usually takes on the appearance of someone close to the person she is dueling or someone who has hurt them. There are times when she will begin such a duel with the appearance of a dead loved one just to taunt them.
Likes:
The smell of burning flowers
The warmth of a fire
The scent of nightshade
Moonlight Walks
Chocolate
Alcohol every now and again
Nature
Falling Snow
Dislikes:
The smell of dung
The cold of snow
Mudbloods
Muggles
Habits: Giving a psychotic smile regardless of the situation
Does your character like Quidditch? Yes
---ABILITIES---
Strengths:
She isn't easily distracted and rarely gives up on what ever her task is. She will hunt someone for days and won't give up until she is either forced to or it means the difference between life and death. This determination makes her a great duelist that and the fact she is a ferocious fighter who will use anything to win. She views everything as a weapon and reacts accordingly not only because of defensive precognition, but because of years of dueling. She is rather hard to catch off guard as a result. She is skilled at the Dark Arts, Transfiguration, offensive charms, and just a few potions.
Weaknesses: For all her strengths she has weaknesses to balance it out. She is the type who is quick to flee if she outnumbered and will only take on more then two at a time when her back is against the wall and in which case she fights like a cornered animal. This is the time she is most dangerous. Her mental instability makes her a bit of a wild card and she is known for just losing it in battle attacking anything she views as a threat wither it be friend or foe. Even though she knows when to run she doesn’t know when to stop talking. She can talk herself out of a situation, but she can talk herself right back into it much faster. Her volatile personality also makes her the most likely to betray because of an offer from another or because she has been crossed. She isn't the best at potions, but she knows enough to get by.
Powers: Metamorphagus, Defensive Precognition
---OTHER---
Pets: An albino Raven by the name of Xanarath(It is questioned if it’s truly albino or transfigured)
Wand:
Wand Wood: Monterillo
WandCore: Basilisk Fang
Wand Length: 11 ¼
Broomstick:FireBolt
Which Hogwarts house would you NOT like to be in?: Hufflepuff
Anything else?: Uhm…The only thing I can think of is to state that my writing skills have improved and I look forward to rping with a character who is really worth putting into this rp because I really put thought into it.
How did you find us?: Juliet
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Post by Laura Kehoe on Aug 5, 2009 15:07:31 GMT -7
Sorry it took so long-I’ve been really busy lately.
Could you read back over your profile again please? There are a couple of typo’s, words left out, mis-spellings and some of the grammar isn’t great. If you can’t see what I mean then let me know and I can pm you about it.
What exactly do you mean by this? Did she just observe the wildlife around her or did she have some sort of affinity towards these animals? Like did she actually spend time with any of these animals as one might with a pet, or did she simply watch them?
What happened to Clytemnestra after this? How did her parents react? Did her father go to Mungo’s? Surely someone there would have asked what happened and got involved? And what about later? What was her families story about how her father lost his fingers? How come the fingers couldn’t be magically repaired?
I’ve checked and I’m gonna have to say no to that. As far as we can gather, a metamorphmagus is able to change their appearance, similar to what one might do with plastic surgery, but would still be and resemble a human being. Since humans do not normally have sharp spines sticking out, it’s not feasible that a metamorphmagus would be able to do that.
According to Canon the wand always chooses the witch or wizard. As far as I know there aren’t any exceptions to this. If you know of one then let me know.
See my previous comments about the wand choosing the wizard, unless you have a source to back this up, in which case it’s perfectly fine.
I see that you’re just trying to emphasise that the wand is a dark wand, but I can’t see how a wand would drive someone to kill themselves-wands don’t control the wizard, they simply complement the abilities of said wizard to perform certain types of magic.
How come they didn’t treat her with respect? Did something happen of was something said on her first day? It’s not very normal for people to reject their own housemates for no apparent reason.
I’m not saying that that’s impossible but it’s rare for people to pick on their own housemates. Was there a particular reason why this girl didn’t like Clytemnestra?
I’m sorry but you can’t have two powers, especially not two such-useful powers. You’re going to have to pick just one power.
What do you mean by didn’t ‘understand’? Did she just not understand why it mattered so much or did she genuinely not understand the concept of being a pureblood or a mudblood-cause that’s not a very difficult concept..
How exactly did she get away with this? What if whoever she was disguised as came into the common room?
This all contradicts itself..
As far as I was aware there were only a handful of Death Eaters at the ministry that day..
If she hated her family so much, why would she be concerned about them?
Why would the ministry fire someone just because their relative is a Death Eater?
How did her mother die? Also, why would she murder her sister? You said earlier that she was concerned for her sister? Why would Clytemnestra go to all the trouble of protecting her sister if she was just going to murder her at the end of it all?
Juliet is not an occlumens.
How did she get away with all this? How did she explain her absence to the other aurors? Surely they would have noticed that Clytemnestra wasn’t around after the battle was over.
I'm going to leave it at that for the moment. When you've fixed that and had a look at your grammer again pm me and I'll look at the rest of your profile. Thanks!
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