Alex Russo

[alexrusso]

Full Name:Alex Marie Russo
Date of Birth:October,29,1988
Place of Birth:Holland
Gender:Female
Race:White
Appearance:Black hair,Brown eyes,Big smile,Straight hair
Occupation:Single altho its really rare

---BACKGROUND---

Heritage:
Family:My parents:Jerry Russo,Marie Russo.Brothers:Justin Russo,Max Russo.Boyfriend:Jake Ryan.Kids:Joel Russo
History:My mom and dad had a deal to make me.My real moms name is Carly Banks she is a bad wizard and my dad wanted me so my mom stayed with him untill i was born and then she left

---GENERAL CHARACTER TRAITS---

Personality:Funny,smart,nice,loving
Likes:Hip hop, boys, her son, her boyfriend
Dislikes:Mistakes broking up with
Habits:reading alot
Does your character like Quidditch? sure

---ABILITIES---

Strengths:To take boys down
Weaknesses:losing someone she loves
Powers:Read Minds,See stuff nobody else can see

---OTHER---

Pets:
Wand:6000
Broomstick:3000
Which Hogwarts house would you NOT like to be in?:Ravenclaw
Anything else?:By the way you did really good job on this site
How did you find us?:I found you by Proboard

[Laura Kehoe]

Welcome to WR!

First of all, you're going to have to add a lot more info to your profile before it's accepted. You need to add more in almost every section. It's important that you write lots in your profile because it shows th mods that you can write and also it helps other roleplayers to relate to your character. Also most people find it pretty usefull when it comes to staying in character.

It might help you to look at a couple of other profiles to see how much info they give and what sort of things they included in their profiles. Here's a couple of good ones to look at, though some of them are extremely detailed.

hpredefined.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=adults&action=display&thread=1102

hpredefined.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=adults&action=display&thread=827

hpredefined.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=adults&action=display&thread=1287

hpredefined.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=adults&action=display&thread=805

Race:White

By 'Race' we mean is your character a human, elf, giant, vampire etc.

Occupation:Single altho its really rare

I don't understand what you mean there?

Heritage:

You left this blank..Is your character a pureblood, halfblood or muggleborn?

Family:My parents:Jerry Russo,Marie Russo.Brothers:Justin Russo,Max Russo.Boyfriend:Jake Ryan.Kids:Joel Russo
History:My mom and dad had a deal to make me.My real moms name is Carly Banks she is a bad wizard and my dad wanted me so my mom stayed with him untill i was born and then she left

You need to give much more info in the history section. She's almost 23 right? So there's loads you can say about her life up until this point. Start with her background history, going into more detail about her family and then her early childhood. Then what house she was in at Hogwarts, whether she did well there or not, any major achievements. Then there's her life after Hogwarts. What's she doing now? You mentioned that she had a boyfriend-who is he? Where did she meet him and what about their child? How old is he?

Personality:Funny,smart,nice,loving
Likes:Hip hop, boys, her son, her boyfriend
Dislikes:Mistakes broking up with

Again, more info is needed here, especially in the personality section. And I'm not sure what you meant in the 'dislikes' section?

Strengths:To take boys down
Weaknesses:losing someone she loves

You need to go into much more detail here. This is probably the most important part of the profile and so lots of attention is needed here. You can talk about physical strenghts and weaknesses here, as well as any emotional ones and personality flaws.

Powers:Read Minds,See stuff nobody else can see

By 'read minds' do you mean legilimency? And what exactly do you mean by 'See stuff nobody else can see'? You'll need to explain both of these powers and how she has these powers.

Wand:6000

By 'wand' we mean what wood type, it's lenght and what core. If you need help deciding then this page is pretty helpfull.

Broomstick:3000

What type of broomstick does she have? Here's a good place to look if you can't think of any brooms. You don't have to have a broom-many wizards and witches don't.